I am a Year 8 student at Glenbrae School in Auckland, NZ. I am in Room 7 and my teachers are Mrs Tofa and Mrs Raj.
Multicultural NZ
NZ is a multicultural place
Bigger than the whole race
They bring new food that people like to taste
We’re in a waka
We’re all in this together
We help one another
Like a gym
Big and strong
We go for a walk like King Kong
By Key
Hey Key, love your poem WOW! "We go for a walk like King Kong" that's cool and funny. Keep on working hard.Ali-Jon
Wow this is a really good poem I especially like how you have given me a picture in my head.Keep up the good work.
Namaste KeyI really love your poem and what you said about king kong it is really amazing. Keep it up.- Mason
Hi there Key, seeing this makes think you've used a lot of description :) Well Done KeyBy Soane
Hello Key, I enjoyed reading your poem because, it had a cool/funny line ' We go for a walk like King Kong ' Overall this poem is decent.Uinita
Hi Key this is a really good poem. Keep up the great work.
Hey Key,I am really amused by this poem you made. Its a job well done:)- Maria
Hi Key this poem is really good I liked how you used a lot of words to make this poem. Keep up the good work!
good job key this is a awsome poem .
Hey Key Great Poem of multicultural Keep Up the great work KEY!!!-Genevieve
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Hey Key, love your poem WOW! "We go for a walk like King Kong" that's cool and funny. Keep on working hard.
ReplyDeleteAli-Jon
Wow this is a really good poem I especially like how you have given me a picture in my head.Keep up the good work.
ReplyDeleteNamaste Key
ReplyDeleteI really love your poem and what you said about king kong it is really amazing. Keep it up.
- Mason
Hi there Key, seeing this makes think you've used a lot of description :) Well Done Key
ReplyDeleteBy Soane
Hello Key, I enjoyed reading your poem because, it had a cool/funny line ' We go for a walk like King Kong ' Overall this poem is decent.
ReplyDeleteUinita
Hi Key this is a really good poem. Keep up the great work.
ReplyDeleteHey Key,
ReplyDeleteI am really amused by this poem you made. Its a job well done:)
- Maria
Hi Key this poem is really good I liked how you used a lot of words to make this poem. Keep up the good work!
ReplyDeletegood job key this is a awsome poem .
ReplyDeleteHey Key Great Poem of multicultural Keep Up the great work KEY!!!
ReplyDelete-Genevieve